Friday, 15 June 2012

Final news writing assignment

This story almost found its way into the local paper, until the council worker had a change of heart and went off the record. Ah well them's the breaks.


Cyclists in Darebin say they were disappointed but not surprised by the Darebin City Council’s plan to dramatically reduce funding for bicycle works in the council area.

The council’s proposed budget, released earlier this month, allocated $0.9 million for the maintenance and renewal of bicycle works, down from the $1.4 million that was allocated last year.

Darebin Bicycle Users Group spokesperson Robin Gallagher said that while they were disappointed to find that funding had been cut, it came in the context of  “a council that hasn’t been good at providing consistent funding for cyclists for some time.”

“Darebin has a number of councillors that are fairly hostile to cyclists,” said Mr Gallagher. “Old fashioned councillors, bit behind the times.”

Mr Gallagher described the $7500 allocation for new bicycle projects, out of a total capital works budget of $32.1 million, as “pretty paltry”.

“When I saw very little money for new on-road projects, I wasn’t surprised at all. Darebin does very little new stuff, when there’s a new bike lane there is kind of a celebration.

“The council should be focussing on providing a consistent amount of funding that enables a lot of stuff to be done. It would be great if they could create a kind of portfolio with consistent funds.

“Part of the problem is the [council] officers might want to do something but there is no money for it.”

A Darebin Council officer, who declined to be named, said that the budget figures were a bit misleading. Last year’s budget had included grants and contributions from external sources, which were not available this year.

The officer also said that some areas of bicycle funding had been increased, and that the establishment of the Darebin Bicycle Advisory Committee highlighted the council’s commitment to cycling in Darebin.

In its most recent council meeting, the council approved a motion to allocate an additional $188,000 towards cycling works in Darebin, although where the money was to come from was unspecified. The council also offered to review the addition of bicycle lanes in Charles Street, Northcote.

Mr Gallagher welcomed the additional funds, but said he wouldn’t believe until “it’s ticked off”.

“I never believe in anything unless I can touch it. It’s not a kings ransom, but it’s better than nothing for the time being.”

A study conducted by the council showed that cyclist numbers have increased in Darebin by 170 per cent since 2005.

Final video assignment

I can't post it here as it is an unlisted video, but if you are desperate to see it you can find it here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IhSONcdPq8U&list=HL1338044777&feature=mh_lolz

All I can say is thank God this subject is over.


Breaking down an argument




Biologist Allen Greer’s article “Fewer people would mean fewer worries”, which appeared in The Australian on January 16th 2008, addresses the issue of climate change and other environmental problems facing society today.  Greer argues that stabilising or reducing the human population is a better way to tackle the Earth’s environmental problems than relying on increasing levels of technology. Essentially he says this because technology is unable to cope with the demands of a growing population and that the human population has already overwhelmed the Earth’s natural cycles.  Unfortunately for Greer, the strength of his main supporting points is somewhat undermined by some flaws in his supporting points, resulting in a somewhat mixed overall argument.

Greer’s main reason for his conclusion, which he comes back to throughout the article, is that technology cannot meet the demand caused by a rapidly expanding population. Greer points out that the proposed technological solutions, such as clean coal and nuclear power are unproven and carry their own environmental problems and may not work as well as was hoped. Greer also states that technology is always playing catch-up with population growth, as soon as one technological solution is found, such as genetic engineering to improve crop yield, is rendered almost obsolete by the population growth that occurred during the development of that technology.

A secondary point also supports this first reason: that technology that is developed, while beneficial for the developers of the technology and society as a whole, also damages the environment. Greer highlights the damage and unalterable changes that damming and irrigation does to natural watercourses, as well as the manipulation of the genes of animals and plants for the benefit of humans rather than the environment.

The second most important reason, according to Greer, is that the growth in human population has reached the point where the planet can no longer cope with the demands and the level of emissions that come from the population. Greer argues that before the Industrial Revolution, the planet’s natural biogeochemical cycles could cope with our emissions, but now those cycles are overwhelmed resulting in a changing climate. He also says that Earth cannot replenish its resources or breakdown our waste fast enough to meet the demands of rapid population growth.

Greer also argues that stabilising human population is a better option because it would not be that hard to achieve. He states that the birth rates in many western countries are already falling and not much adjustment would be needed to create a stable population. Greer also uses China as an example of a country that has already employed an effective population reduction technique that has minimised environmental damage.

The final point that Greer discusses is that the growth in human population has reached the point where is damaging the quality of life of some of the population. He states that the planet has finite resources, and that a rapidly increasing population means there is less available for each individual person.

Greer’s overall argument follows the pattern of a deductive argument, which is that if the reasons for supporting the conclusions were true, therefore so would the conclusion be true. Greer emphasises this by restating his conclusion after he explains each of his supporting reasons.  But whether the reasons Greer has provided are sufficient for us to accept his overall argument can only be established by evaluating the strength of his reasoning.

As mentioned in the introduction, some of Greer’s points have flaws that affect the strength of the argument. One such flaw involves Greer’s statement that population growth is affecting quality of life. While the statement in itself may well be true and sounds acceptable, the relevancy of it in an article when the conclusion regards technology and reducing population size has to be questioned.  By including such a statement, Greer runs the risk of adding what is known as a red herring to the argument. Similar to a detective or mystery story, a red herring in an argument sense is designed to throw the reader off track and think of something that may not be all that important. It is especially dangerous in cases such as these when what is claimed seems valid and relevant. Fortunately for Greer, this flaw does not greatly reduce the validity of his argument, as it is appears in an argument that provides only minor support for his conclusion.

There are also some issues with relevancy with his supportive argument regarding the development of technology. The mention of the benefits to the creators of the new technology isn’t especially important to his argument, and undermines the other supportive reasons he includes in that argument. The argument in itself also is not especially important and only by tying it in to his main reason for support does Greer give it a tenuous relevance and acceptability. If Greer had made greater mention of the damage of technology on the environment in this argument, it would have been of more value to his overall conclusion.

The most problematic flaw in Greer’s argument is his assertion that lowering the human population would be easy to achieve. It is problematic because that statement in itself may not even be correct. While it is true that birth rates are declining in western countries, it is not the case in less developed nations such as those in Asia and Africa. Greer appears to have made a hasty generalisation here; he has drawn a conclusion from too small a sample. Even his example of China as a country that has limited its own population growth is problematic. Very few countries with long established ideas of civil liberties would support a move to regulate the number of children a person could have, no matter what the birth rate of the country was. Greer himself even stated that the policy was “coercive”.

But while there were some flaws in Greer’s argument, there were elements that provided strong support for his overall conclusion. One of his main arguments, that the planted was being overwhelmed but a booming population, is well supported by evidence that was easy to accept. It is common knowledge that the level of emissions, such as carbon dioxide, has increased greatly since the Industrial Revolution. It is also a commonly held belief among scientists that those emissions are impacting on the Earth’s climate. The fact that nuclear waste takes a long time to breakdown and become safe is also hard to dispute. As a specialist in biology, a science that includes the study of the environment, you can more easily accept what Greer claims, as there is an assumption that he has relevant expertise in the area. The relevancy of the point and the authority with which it is presented add weight to Greer’s overall conclusion.

Greer’s major support for his conclusion, that technology cannot meet the demand of population growth, is similarly backed by strong evidence. The idea of clean coal is, as Greer points out, still an idea and the problems with nuclear power are well documented. We can accept the Greer’s claim that technology is always playing catch-up with population growth based on his example of the genetic engineering of crops. Despite all of the innovations and new technology that has enabled growth of crops in previously barren places, there is still hunger and starvation in many countries. Again Greer’s knowledge of biology and genetics adds weight to what he claims. The supportive argument that Greer provides for this argument also lends some support. This is perhaps the most acceptable and relevant of all the arguments the Greer makes in support of his conclusion.

We can see now that Greer’s argument contains a mix of well thought out, reasoned statements as well some that were less so. The two main reasons in support of the conclusion were well supported, while a number of his more minor arguments had flaws. We cannot say that the argument is entirely good or bad, due to its inconsistencies and unevenness. It could be argued that if Greer had focussed more on his two main arguments, or even left out some of the minor ones, the article as a whole would have been stronger. Greer failed to provide any real solutions to the problems that he discussed. He also did not discuss any viable way to reduce or limit population growth. Greer did consider other factors, such as consumption playing a role in problem of limited resources, but only on a superficial level.

The issues of climate change, the environment and a rapidly growing human population are very important, especially in countries such as Australia which are vulnerable to climate change and are attempting to balance protection of the environment with a growing population. Greer’s article highlights the difficulty in finding the right balance, and encourages us to come up with innovative solutions to try and address these problems.